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'''The Orange Tomato '''is the continuation of [[The Unbearable Rabbit]] story.
 
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|next=}}'''The Orange Tomato '''is the continuation of [[The Unbearable Rabbit]] story.
 
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[[Zoë]] continue her narration to Min explaining that, after Torg's [[The Unbearable Rabbit|unsuccessful attempt to defend his garden]], he become more obssesed than ever in get his revenge on the woodland animals and announced during the breakfast that he would get rid of them with the "operation" ''Orange Tomato, ''much to [[Kiki]]'s horror. Fed up with this obsession, Zoëpresents to [[Torg]] the internet game ''Hamsternom, ''wich consists in the player to feed a digital hamster without overfeeding it, but the more friends the player manages to help feed the hamster, more points and applications he gets. From this point in her narration, Zoëclaimed to have done a grave mistake. Once again, the group become distract with the internet and, to Kiki's chagrin, forgot to feed her. Also, like in [[The Shallow Beds|Shallow Beds]], Torg has little success in get friends on the net while [[Riff]] and Zoëachieved several points in Hamsternom. Torg decided to get more friends and points for the game by sneaking to the market with the help of [[Bun-bun]] and [[Jessup]], but Zoëand Riff notice that and, suspecious, follow them.
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Needless to say, Torg make the fool of himself in the market, but he did have some moderate success in get friends (for exemple, when a woman wrongly assumed that Torg was wooing her, she slaps him, but soon forgives and even gave her number after Torg explained the true situation.). There Torg meets her internet friend and park ranger, [[Shika Nogeyama]], also know by the alias Noogy, and Torg promptly introduces her to his gang. After hearing jis problem, Noogy decided to take them to her friend, Harold Aicth, a nerdy, but friendly expert of computation and social network. Before formally introduce him, Noogy shows some animals rescued in human territory, and one of them includes the bear from the previous story, who Noogy correctly suspects to have been beat up by a mother bear and [[Bun-bun|a small rabbit]]. This leads to Torg mentioning Bun-bun, making the bear swore revenge against the mini lop. After formal introdution, Harold Aicth claimed that he have created an internet game that would make them dropped the one they are currently playing, but when Torg ask how this game could be better than Hamsternom, Harold run away crying and revels, in anger, that Hamsternom ''is'' the game that he was talking about, and that the coorporation that he showed the game, Xployt-U-shoft, must have realeased the game without his consent.
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Rushing to home, Harold vows to sue them, but when he reachs his computer, he learns that Xployt-U-shoft is ''suing'' him for "defamation" for accusing them in the internet of stealing the game (the topic become a hit in Bleater due to Zoë having wrote about it). During an argument with the CEO, Harold scolded him for stealing his life project and for faselly accusing him from lying, but the CEO simply mocked him, citting that he has no prove that the game is his original idea, and that the idea that he took his wholly life to create a game that consist in feeding a pet is too silly to be taken serious in any courty. Meanwhile, the cubby from the previous story encounters the bear and taunted him for being so easily beaten by his mother, but when he revels that he knowns where Torg and Bun-bun live (due to his friendship with the squirrels), the bear quickly rip his cage apart and follows the cub to home. When it becomes clear that the bear isn't a good strategist (trying to openly challange Bun-bun, despite the latter being far stronger than he is) the Cub suggests to the bear wait Bun-bun outside and attack him on his back to prevent a counter attack.
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When the group get back to home (thanks to Jessup), they resume the game and Zoë allows the chimpmunks and the cub to stay inside the house on condition that they help to feed her digital Hamster to gain more points. Meanwhile, as Harold mourns how his attempt to sue Xployt-U-shoft failed, he explain to his cat that Hamsternom isn't just a game. Rather, its a complex graphic subliminar menssage program that subtly lets its users addicts. quickly realising that Xployt-U-shoft used his code to realease the game on theuir name, Harold easily invaded the company's system and changed some patterns that allows to turn those how look into zombies, in order to infect some user from the company server, believing that the future damages would make Xployt-U-shoft to be sued by several persons. Unfortunately, the menssege spreads from ''his ''computer, rather than from the company's sever, and another problem arised when the program affected ''animals'', rather than persons. This proved to be dangerous to the main cast, since the program affects any animal into consume flesh, regardless of being carnivorous or not, and to make matters worse, they are next to several animals that saw the game. The story ends with the protagonists being cornered by [[Nombies|zombie-like animals]].
 
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Revision as of 21:47, 24 May 2012

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The Orange Tomato is the continuation of The Unbearable Rabbit story.

Plot

Zoë continue her narration to Min explaining that, after Torg's unsuccessful attempt to defend his garden, he become more obssesed than ever in get his revenge on the woodland animals and announced during the breakfast that he would get rid of them with the "operation" Orange Tomato, much to Kiki's horror. Fed up with this obsession, Zoëpresents to Torg the internet game Hamsternom, wich consists in the player to feed a digital hamster without overfeeding it, but the more friends the player manages to help feed the hamster, more points and applications he gets. From this point in her narration, Zoëclaimed to have done a grave mistake. Once again, the group become distract with the internet and, to Kiki's chagrin, forgot to feed her. Also, like in Shallow Beds, Torg has little success in get friends on the net while Riff and Zoëachieved several points in Hamsternom. Torg decided to get more friends and points for the game by sneaking to the market with the help of Bun-bun and Jessup, but Zoëand Riff notice that and, suspecious, follow them.

Needless to say, Torg make the fool of himself in the market, but he did have some moderate success in get friends (for exemple, when a woman wrongly assumed that Torg was wooing her, she slaps him, but soon forgives and even gave her number after Torg explained the true situation.). There Torg meets her internet friend and park ranger, Shika Nogeyama, also know by the alias Noogy, and Torg promptly introduces her to his gang. After hearing jis problem, Noogy decided to take them to her friend, Harold Aicth, a nerdy, but friendly expert of computation and social network. Before formally introduce him, Noogy shows some animals rescued in human territory, and one of them includes the bear from the previous story, who Noogy correctly suspects to have been beat up by a mother bear and a small rabbit. This leads to Torg mentioning Bun-bun, making the bear swore revenge against the mini lop. After formal introdution, Harold Aicth claimed that he have created an internet game that would make them dropped the one they are currently playing, but when Torg ask how this game could be better than Hamsternom, Harold run away crying and revels, in anger, that Hamsternom is the game that he was talking about, and that the coorporation that he showed the game, Xployt-U-shoft, must have realeased the game without his consent.

Rushing to home, Harold vows to sue them, but when he reachs his computer, he learns that Xployt-U-shoft is suing him for "defamation" for accusing them in the internet of stealing the game (the topic become a hit in Bleater due to Zoë having wrote about it). During an argument with the CEO, Harold scolded him for stealing his life project and for faselly accusing him from lying, but the CEO simply mocked him, citting that he has no prove that the game is his original idea, and that the idea that he took his wholly life to create a game that consist in feeding a pet is too silly to be taken serious in any courty. Meanwhile, the cubby from the previous story encounters the bear and taunted him for being so easily beaten by his mother, but when he revels that he knowns where Torg and Bun-bun live (due to his friendship with the squirrels), the bear quickly rip his cage apart and follows the cub to home. When it becomes clear that the bear isn't a good strategist (trying to openly challange Bun-bun, despite the latter being far stronger than he is) the Cub suggests to the bear wait Bun-bun outside and attack him on his back to prevent a counter attack.

When the group get back to home (thanks to Jessup), they resume the game and Zoë allows the chimpmunks and the cub to stay inside the house on condition that they help to feed her digital Hamster to gain more points. Meanwhile, as Harold mourns how his attempt to sue Xployt-U-shoft failed, he explain to his cat that Hamsternom isn't just a game. Rather, its a complex graphic subliminar menssage program that subtly lets its users addicts. quickly realising that Xployt-U-shoft used his code to realease the game on theuir name, Harold easily invaded the company's system and changed some patterns that allows to turn those how look into zombies, in order to infect some user from the company server, believing that the future damages would make Xployt-U-shoft to be sued by several persons. Unfortunately, the menssege spreads from his computer, rather than from the company's sever, and another problem arised when the program affected animals, rather than persons. This proved to be dangerous to the main cast, since the program affects any animal into consume flesh, regardless of being carnivorous or not, and to make matters worse, they are next to several animals that saw the game. The story ends with the protagonists being cornered by zombie-like animals.